thriller idea's

For our thriller sequence we have thought about out location which could be a kitchen, the film would have a full view of a charcater cutting red meat with blood on the chopping board then cut to a close up of the knife chopping the meat with intence sound of cutting, going to the bottom of the stairs to call the children down for help or dinner, walking back into the kitchen she hears a door creek,looking around to see if anyone is there. as she gets back to the chopping board (camera behind the woman as if it was the killer), suddenly she drops to the floor, close up of her hand landing on the floor dropping the knife.( camera slowly rises to reveal a man walking off from behind with a blood covered carving knife) close up on the knife as he wipes it with a cloth.fades out.