change in idea

the victim will no longer call up to the kids before she realises the knife is gone, as it wouldnt make sense for them to be there and not realise she is dead before the next morning when the friend finds her.
she hears the sound of the door while she is cutting meat, and then she calls out to someone who lives with her not knowing if they are there or not, (they are not) and then when she comes back the knife is gone and thats when she gets killed.


also when she gets stabbed, instead of viewing it from half way up her body, and actually seeing the stabbing, you see it from the floor. e.g, the knife would drop, then blood would drop, then she would fall, all seen from her feet, then when she has fallen camera drifts to blood-covered hand.