feedback from rough cut

After everyone looked and analysed our rough cut piece, they wrote down what they thought and how we could inprove it. After looking at it again i agree with them in how we are giving too much away and shouldn't have the 'omg' as sharon walks into the house. I think the sequence shouldend there to make it a cliff hanger rather than letting the aundience know whats happened as it is a bit obvious.
Most people think that our music is too tense in some places such as at the start in the woods where it could be less intense.
We could have used more varied shots to make it more interesting.